My soon to be WS

I will start a WS when my current ones die/end.
I will post up samples so you may comment on them when they are ready.

WS?

White scenario

Chapter one: Landfall

The massive ship's loading ramp extended out towards the landing pad. This spot seemed to be in the middle of the jungle. The trees swayed back and forth and gave off a small but constant rustling noise. Once your group unboarded the ship the crew followed you out and started to unload the supplies. On your left you can see them move the crates out of the ship and place them on a huge grav sled. On your right you can see a trail lead into the jungle.
A short Zabrak dressed in a tech suit wanders out from the trail, and makes his way over to your group.

"Glad to see some new hands. As you know already, unless you've forgotten of course, you'll be here for the next two months give or take one. Some of you are part of my research group who are studying the planets strange bacteria in the some of you are just here to make sure no animals break through the wall, and others are here to repair the equipment that seems to be breaking faster than we can order new ones."

He stops his monologue and looks at each person in the group.
"Ermm....My boss, the top researcher, didn't tell me who's in which group....So I'll just...go ahead and lead you to the facility and and let her handle that. Any questions you have you can shoot at me on the way. We'll be there in a few minutes though, and my boss can answer more questions than I can anyway, but it's up to you."

He finished, shrugged, then started heading into the jungle trail.

YOUR ROOM:


CANTINA:



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^Advice?

Unless if you have a laid back group I would make that post bigger.

However as for me I've left WS's. It was starting to feel like a chore and then I found the RP guild or re-found is a better term for it.

Oh......yeah I still need to check that site back out later. I've just been so busy. Thats why ws had to be dropped. Even swc has fallen into the background. I hope soon I'll have life back in its proper headlock.




But either way I'll make it longer. Thanks for the input.

Chapter one: Landfall

The massive ship's long, scuffed, loading ramp extended out towards the landing pad. This spot seemed to be in the middle of the jungle. The trees swayed back and forth in the warm breeze and gave off a small but constant rustling noise. Once your group unboarded the ship the crew followed you out and started to unload the supplies. On your left you can see them move the crates out of the ship and place them on a huge grav sled. On your right you can see a trail lead into the jungle.
A short Zabrak dressed in a bright white lab technician suit with marks of jungle grime and mud, wanders out from the trail accompanied by a lightly armored Twi'lek who carried an EE-3. As the Scientest walks toward the landing pad he drops his datapad*. With a sigh he bends over to pick the now dirtied datapad, then continues over to your group. When he arrives he dust off the datapad, motions as if he is changing the screen. After a moment of reading he addresses the group.

"Glad to see some new hands." He says with a smile. You can see that even in this remote forest on this remote planet that the staff must have up to date hygienic equipment in the base.
"MY name is ???? ?????? " He said as he gestured towards himself. "As you know already, unless you've forgotten of course, you will be here for the next five months give or take one or two. Some of you are part of my research group which are studying the planets strange bacteria and some of you are just here to make sure no animals break through the wall,or handle them if they do, and others are here to repair the equipment that seems to be breaking faster than we can order new ones."

He stops his monologue and looks at each person in the group.
"Ermm....My boss, the top researcher, didn't tell me who's in which group....So I'll just...go ahead and lead you to the facility and let her handle that. We shall be there in a few minutes so I strongly suggest you do not ask too many questions, my boss can answer more questions than I can anyway, but it's up to you."

He finished, shrugged, then started heading into the jungle trail.

As the your group walks through the Jungle with the Twi'lek guard in the lead, noises can be heard coming from the sides of the trail. Most do not sound friendly. Thankfully there is a fence separating trail from the rest of the jungle. The Twi'lek pipes in for the first time.
"Don't worry about the noises. We made sure that no hostile animals could get through the is elctro-fence. It gives a shock to any thing that hits it with hard enough force. He says as he touches the metal softly as a demonstration. Just don't punch it and you'll be fine. The Twi'lek thought for a second then continued. "Since this experiment is privately funded the entire faciltay couldn't be completely covered by this powerful fence."

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((OOC:Please post your questions now, or just post your entrance. Next round will be two days after I decide that the last post has been made.))
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Alright. Please proof read. Thanks. I'm working on the next part now.

This is the completely wrong forum for this.

Be quiet Hal!



JK !!

Move this to the right one then mod man with your other worldly powers. Thanks.

Honestly never mind. I must of been really tired when I made that post! XD
I feel stupid...

LOL!

/me slaps you silly!



Any way what do you think of it? Better? Longer? Needs to be more descriptive?

It's pretty good, but depending on who you WS with the standards may be higher.
I really think they should like Casual and Advanced sections for WS's like they do on the RP guild.